My Niece Web birthday vow was to rewrite and redraw a previous Niece Web story. So now its about time I chose that story that I’ll be rewriting.
Niece Web had 5 stories: Disastrous Date, The More You Know Through Fear, The Chatterbox Technique, The Rainy Day Club, and a series of comics that I’ll nickname “The Egg Bet Story”. I’ll go through each one, tell you a little about it, and any possible reasons why I’d want to revisit the story.
If you’d like to read the comics for yourself, please visit the Niece Web Gallery on DeviantART: Link. The relevant comics have the story name in the title.
Disastrous Date
This was the story that kicked off Niece Web, and introduced Spider and the Nieces. The story’s about Spider having a dinner date with his friends Neoma and Melony. Melony had recently got reacquainted with Spider and she tries to use this dinner to hook up with him. But unfortunately for her, Neoma also has feelings for Spider, gets jealous of Melony’s advances toward him, and tries to stop her. The nieces are at the dinner too and they stir up trouble for their own amusement. Spider’s just along for the ride through the drama.
Out of all the stories I did for Niece Web, this one seems like the most fun to rewrite. There are opportunities to have each of the main characters shine. There are lots of opportunities for some lol moments. Plus it’ll be fun to redraw this storyline using my 2011 art skills, and compare it to my 2005 artwork.
The More You Know Through Fear
This was the Halloween storyline. The Nieces are waiting to attend a costume party. While they’re waiting, Autumn suggests they play “The Game of Fear”, where you try to guess what the other person is afraid of. Through this game, the Nieces reveal their deepest fears. Some funny and some sad.
I could see a possible rewrite with this one. I could elaborate further with this story. Like I could keep the stuff dealing with the game of fear, but include some stuff of them actually attending the Halloween party. Or I could even have the “Game of Fear” take place AT the Halloween party, with other people participating too. The only downside is that Dark Spider doesn’t heavily feature into this storyline, and I definitely want to write a story with him having a prominent role. I’d have to work quite a bit to include him into the story.
The Chatterbox Technique
I’m crazy for coming up with this story. Dark Spider goes on a date with Neoma, and leaves his nieces in the care of Marty. Marty is a big misogynistic asshole though, so Spider’s other friend Veronica comes to babysit Marty. Marty treats the nieces like slaves, and they resent him for it. Seeing this resentment, Veronica teaches the nieces the chatterbox technique, which has the power to turn men into sex crazed lunatics. Armed with this technique, the nieces make Marty their slave as revenge and shenanigans ensues.
I really don’t want to deal with this storyline again, to be honest. I’m not a big fan of it. I made the Marty character too much of a creepy asshole, and he rubs me the wrong way. The idea of the nieces being taught such a sexual technique rubs me the wrong way too. Gives me pedophile undertones. I hate to say all of this about my own storyline, as this was all done for gags and laughs, but it is what it is.
The Rainy Day Club
The LOOONNNGEST of the 5 storylines. Dark Spider goes to the DMV on monsoon of a day, and the nieces are stuck inside the house. To pass the time, they each write down an activity, and randomly pick which activity to do. They start off playing a trivia game, but the whole day soon derails into a dramafest, as the nieces hurt each others feelings and get various acts of revenge on each other. But through the drama, they get a chance to learn more about themselves and each other.
I consider this storyline the most epic and complete out of the 5 stories, and I can’t really imagine tweaking it in any kind of way. It’s my favorite storyline.
The Egg Bet
(The first 8 comics, on the first page, in the Niece Web gallery at DA. It starts with “Prelude to the Egg Bet” and ends with “Shut Up About the Toilet Egg”)
The storyline that ended Niece Web. Spring bets Winter and Summer that she can convince Autumn that she laid an egg. Summer thinks this is ridiculous and bets against Spring. But unfortunately, Spring does convince Autumn that she laid an egg, through a clever prank.
As it stands, the story is complete. But in reality its incomplete, because I abruptly ended Niece Web before it reached its conclusion. The last comic just so happens to avoid being a cliffhanger and concludes the story in a way I didn’t intend it to. This storyline has the most incentive for me to rewrite it, since its incomplete as I originally intended it.
The Final Verdict
It’s a toss-up between Disastrous Date, The More You know Through Fear and The Egg Bet. I have decided to rewrite the Disastrous Date storyline because like I mentioned before, it seems like the most fun for me to rewrite. Also it incorporates all the main characters and has the most opportunities for them to shine. I will throw a bone to the Egg Bet and draw some strips that gives it a proper conclusion. But that’s for later.
Since the story’s chosen, now its time to rework its plot. But that’s for another post. Laters.
Let’s Make a Let’s Play video
In the last post, I went into a brief history of “Let’s Play” videos and why I find them enjoyable. In this post, I’ll go into how I create them, step by step.
Step 1: Choosing a Video Game
First, Dragon Maiden and I choose a video game that we would like play and make entertaining commentary about. So far we have a list of games that we want to eventually make Let’s Plays about. For our first couple of games, we’re going to be playing Super Mario All Stars which is a collection of the Super Mario Bros games. We’re starting out with this game because we’re both familiar with it, its fun to play, and there’s stuff to discuss about it. Plus by time we’re done with the game, we would have ironed out the kinks of creating Let’s Play videos and be comfortable enough to branch out into other games.
Step 2: Setting up a screen recording program
A screen recording program is a program that records video footage of whatever is currently on your computer screen. Having one is essential because we’ll be playing the video game on the computer. Currently, I use a program called “BB Flashback Recorder”. The free version has all the base features I need to reliably record video footage.
The welcome screen for BB FlashBack Express Recorder
Step 3: Downloading the video game ROM and console emulator
In order to play certain video games on the computer, you’ll need a program called an emulator. An emulator is a computer program that emulates, or mimics, a video game console, like the NES, SNES, Sega Genesis, Sony Playstation, etc. Once you have the emulator for the console of your choice, then you need to download the ROM of the video game you want. A ROM is a file that contains the code of the video game, that the emulator program can read and play.
Step 4: Play the video game on the emulator, while recording yourself with the screen recorder.
I set up the emulator, start the video game, and then play it until the point where I want to start recording. From there I pause the game, and use the screen recorder to start recording the emulator. Then I unpause the game and continue playing until I’m done recording. When I’m done recording, I stop the screen recorder and save the footage.
Using BB FlashBack Recorder (the tiny icons in the upper right hand corner) to record playing a video game off of ZSNES, a Super Nintendo Emulator
Step 5: Record the audio commentary
Once I have the footage saved, I replay the footage in a regular media player, like Windows Media Player. But while I’m replaying the footage, Dragon Maiden and I are also talking into a microphone and recording my voice over commentary. I use another computer program, named “Audacity”, to record this audio. Audacity is an audio recorder and editor, that lots of musicians, podcasters, and audiophiles use to edit their music/audio files. Its pretty powerful, but I use it for the simple purpose of recording my commentary. Once we’re done talking, I save the audio as an mp3 file.
The main screen of Audacity, the audio recorder/editor I use
Step 6: Putting the video and audio commentary together into one file
After the commentary is done, I use Windows Movie Maker to combine the video and audio into one playable file. Windows Movie Maker is a simple video editor, that comes bundled in most Windows Operating Systems. It works perfectly for what I need it for now, which is trimming the video file so all the useless footage is cut out, and adding the commentary audio track to the video footage. But down the road, I want to upgrade to a more powerful video editor like Sony Vegas or Adobe Premiere. But for now, Movie Maker is good enough.
The main screen for Windows Movie Maker
Step 7: Uploading the combined file onto YouTube, so that others can watch and enjoy it.
Once I’m done using Movie Maker, that’s it….I finished the editing the Let’s Play video. I save the video into a file type that YouTube will accept, such as a WMV file. Afterwards, I upload the file onto YouTube, which takes FOREVER to do (one 15 minute file takes around 30 minutes). Once YouTube accepts the file, I’m done with the whole process. Now people can watch Frozen Diamond Dragon and the Chimeric Muse playing video games 🙂
A screenshot of YouTube uploading a file
So that’s how I create a Let’s Play video. Check out our YouTube channel here and I hope you enjoy our videos.